From Today, a collaborative book by David Chirot (Wisconsin, USA)
& Cheryl Penn (Durban, South Africa)
Today by David Chirot & Cheryl Penn. Internet
Archive (Collection: opensource, visual poetry, collaborative poetry).
Published 11.06.2015. 17 pages. Free e-book & pdf
By
De Villo Sloan
The sad passing of Wisconsin, USA, visual poet
David Chirot (aka David-Baptiste Chirot aka D-BC) in June of 2021 has elicited international sympathy
and sorrow. I am pleased we are seeing a concerted effort to locate,
preserve and share Chirot’s work.
This review is meant to shed light upon a
relatively obscure but I think significant D-BC collab with South African visual artist
and poet, Cheryl Penn. The resulting book, Today, was published
digitally in 2015 at the Internet Archive. Penn writes Today was made
for her publication An Encyclopedia of Everything – Expanded Version.
The book can be downloaded from the Internet
Archive free of charge in a variety of forms. Cheryl Penn has made another version
available on her collab blog. I strongly recommend image-text readers keep a
personal library apart from the internet.
https://archive.org/details/Today_201511/page/n15/mode/2up
Cheryl Penn's Collaborative Poetry & Writing blog:
https://collaborativecanto.blogspot.com/2015/03/today-david-chirot-usacheryl-penn-south.html?fbclid=IwAR3VMSvLKwSK_yLu3LODlZg1bKnxfg4xaep4Js2ibZPSldQdG1Yv1a7WXss
The 17 pages of Today showcase (unfortunately
for hardcore vispo fans) only four image-text pieces (2 X Chirot; 2 X Penn). “Correspondence
with David began 14th August 2014, and has not ended – it was just
time to commit to the printed word,” writes Penn.
Both Penn & Chirot are much-admired in the
Eternal Network (international mail art community). Perhaps Today is, albeit subconsciously, inspired by the “Correspondence Novel” theorized by postal
artist, David Zack.
Polyphony - Polyvoiced
Today is a dialog between two (disembodied) voices. This
rhetorical and literary form is ancient and well-tested, Plato being one, prime
example (to whom Chirot & Penn allude in their dialog). In English language 19th century verse the dramatic monolog was a popular form (Browning) just prior to the rise of Modernism.
The dialog blossomed during 20th century Modernism into complex points of
view and poly-voiced scores, mutating even further among the avant garde. A
Pre-Modernist dialog with affinities to Today is Edgar Allan Poe’s “The
Colloquy of Monos & Una” (1850), which features discourse between the dead and the living.
Russian literary theorist Mikhail Bakhtin
(1895-1975) is widely acknowledged as having first applied the term “polyphony”
from music to literature in an effort to describe tendencies he saw in Fyodor Dostoevsky's novels. The “polyphony” or “polyvoice” concept was widely disseminated via its use by Pound and Eliot in “The Wasteland” (1922) and also via Woolf, Joyce, Stein and other Moderns.
Bakhtin identified the “dialogic” (and the oppositional “monologic”). He located attributes unique to the modern dialogic: one is
an emphasis on language and syntax. Bakhtin’s views were embraced in critical
theory, especially by the Post-Structuralists (a branch of pomo critical theory sometimes called Deconstruction, although this interchange is contested in some quarters).
Some critics have analyzed polyvoiced works as a single voice and, conversely, others approach polyvoicing as multiple, fragmented voices in various time-space states of simultaneity. (I feel like a battered freedom fighter in The Terminator desperately trying to explain time travel and killer robots to an armed Los Angeles cop, but the critical theory has practical use in a realm such as this review, really.)
Chirot & Penn – neither of whom I suspect would appreciate my designation – give us a fascinating example of a Postmodern dialog. Here in 2021, in the blazing disintegrating tail of pomo lit, this Chirot and Penn collab is part of genre evolution.
I believe Today is a complex text that can reveal its esoteric charms with concepts from critical theory, including the significance of silences. My goal is not to provide a package reading of Today but instead offer possibilities for those who wish to explore this text.
Neon lyricism - Defenses, Deflections, Silences
Much of the appeal for those who seek and ultimately read Today is likely curiosity about two writer-artists well known in the vispo
& asemic communities. (I must clarify here Cheryl Penn is alive &
thriving!)Today will not disappoint on
the the cult of personality level: Thanks to the font key provided you can try to identify the individual author of every word, line and stanza in Today (not as easy as it appears). The dialog is a maze of knots, tensions,
insecurities, complex defenses, deflections, guilt and apologies. Here is an excerpt:
Air
in room cold, quiet, as leftover lamb
Gnawing
on the bones of awakening
Odd
found totemic objects emerge slowly
Adjusting
fading dyslexic eyesight
New
choreographies appear
The
singing of things
Begins
broken
scattershot drumming
Among
the gathering muscles, nerves & bones
The
neon lyricism and film noir ghosts of Today’s early section (above) describe the construction of a sign-shifting wall in the poem that eventually disappears. Voice and tone shift, meander but unite solidly at the end of Today for a lyric crescendo. Read as polyphony, the poem becomes a montage of "poetic" moments:
The
violins are fine tuned, no party frocks in sight.
Are
you ok?
I’m
not supposed to say anything
but
someone broke into the library.
Mingle
please
when
all humans are extinct
start
up a conversation
you own all your remaining
minutes
May
I take a few
seconds?
The passage above, an example of lyrical elegance, is less material realist and more focused on dialog. Subjectively, I envision an afternoon cocktail party, hushed conversations, whispered confessions. But neither narratives nor dreams persist for long in the Chirot-Penn collab. My quasi-Victorian scene is no more than a mirage. To borrow a term from Jim Leftwich, I have had a “pansemic” flash of temporal understanding. This, then, is one great pleasure of Today.
All in all, Today is an example of a quirky,
literary B-Side – distant relative to the roman a clef – that is, essential material for our explorations deeper into the works of visual poets Cheryl
Penn and David Chirot.
